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11-54 is the story of a filly exploring a strange facility filled with hostile creatures and unstable architecture.
You've gone quite a ways in the last few days but as it stands, your journey is not over.
So far you were born into this facility from mysterious tubes that litter the building. You've managed to die twice, only to be re-born from the tubes. Along the way you met a pony who is your clone, who is much older than you, and remembers the facility before if fell into disrepair. Your older clone who you've named Spearmint told you about the mental conditioning program that the facility used to run, which left her a bit of a psychological mess. There are various hostile artificial organisms created by the facility that lurk the halls. You are also being hunted by the automated security who seeks to contain the artificial organisms. Along the way you've also meet an investigative reporter by the Name of Photo Bomb who was in a helicopter that crashed into the building. Upon meeting the reporter you choose to name yourself Peppermint
Right now, a prototype bio-computer named Apollo has locked you in his laboratory and last requested you tell him what you read on his terminal.
What will you do now?
Come on in to the 11-54 CYOA and help this filly and her companions escape.
| >> | File: 1451801880352.png (320.00 KB, 768x768, 11-52-292.png)The room has a water line and a couple gas lines under the sink, and two filing cabinets. There are two metal doors, both held shut by Apollo, as well as a sliding glass door that Photobomb just broke, that Apollo can control the operation of. making the broken glass leftover on the door a dangerous weapon at Apollo's disposal if you choose to pass through Apollo has opened the door on your crowbar getting it stuck in the door. Power to the outlets has been shut off. |
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| >> | Also, look in the room. do you see a desk in there? Because that built in escape hatch should still be there. |
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| >> | File: 1451809732157.png (439.00 KB, 768x768, 11-52-294.png)Current items |
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| >> | >>25976938 |
| >> | I also wish we stole photo bombs hat. We would have looked pretty damn fly in it. |
| >> | >>25976938 |
| >> | File: 1451739507143.png (388.00 KB, 768x768, 11-52-292a.png)I'm actually just going to stop here for the night and let the thread decided if what you actually want to do over night. Cause this could go all kinds of ways from here. |
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| >> | beb |
| >> | Who thinks we should go back to photo bomb. Stand over her, and then snatch her hat and putting it on right in front of her? |
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| >> | >>25979995 |
| >> | >>25977914 |
| >> | so who thinks it would be better to go deeper into the lab since the camera lights are off and apollo isn't looking at us anymore? |
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| >> | I actually feel sorry for Apollo |
| >> | >>25981301 |
| >> | What the fuck. Seriously I've been reading this and as far as I can tell when presented with a computer of uncertain capabilities and certain emotional stunting the first thing people decided to do was antagonize it as much as possible for no apparent reason. |
| >> | Guys, consider this: |
| >> | >>25981372 |
| >> | I'm a faggot and in spite of things I don't want to give up on her just like this. |
| >> | >>25981550 |
| >> | I'm fine with ditching Photo but we need to make sure we don't act too rashly. |
| >> | beb |
| >> | Spear is our only friend. |
| >> | We have to protect SPear at all costs |
| >> | >>25981483 |
| >> | If we are going to leave PB behind let's at least leave her a way to follow us. |
| >> | Leaving her a trail to follow means leaving a trail to follow for the OTHER annoying Pegasus faggot and any other nasty that comes along. |
| >> | >>25983361 |
| >> | Thread seems to be teetering on the edge of death, so let's put it to a vote. |
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| >> | >Now that you've had time to calm down you begin to wonder if you're making the right decision. |
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| >> | Taking the hat is the sign of our utter desertion of Photo Bomb. We committing to dis? |
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| >> | Even though we essentially got nowhere, which is probably my fault, I've gotta go, I'll pick this back up tomorrow. |
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| >> | bump |
| >> | would she believe it if we just say "i help you, you help me?" |
| >> | Bump |
| >> | beb |
| >> | hope photo bomb can get her shit together. maybe we should tell her that we already died in this facility. She wouldn't stand a chance because she only has one life. |
| >> | >>25984088 |
| >> | bump to 1 |
| >> | page 10 |
| >> | JUST |
| >> | C'mon photo bomb. You gotta cool it if you wanna live. Then again I would be pissed if my life was in the hands of a 8? year old too. |
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| >> | boop to establish dominance |
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| >> | Before we return the hat can we at least show spearmint and ask her how we look? |
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| >> | I'm going to call it a night due to the time. |
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| >> | >>26003044 |
| >> | Can't help but wonder whether the alicorn from above won't be wishing to recruit us for the fight against the machines in return for helping us out... forcing us to pass this neutral middle ground between the two ''factions''... I think it's a shame we angered this one universally tolerated/respected place/being. Why did you guys decide on breaking Apollo's privacy after you succesfully avoided angering it when you've managed to convince Photo Bomb not to check the files and received a direct warning from Apollo when going for the computer. I don' get it - you were doing so great in following the route to peace with this being too... the lack of ill-will of it clearly shown in how it allowed taking stuff from the place and leaving whenever desitred. Can't say i've had a chance to affect that though, having read the whole story just recently... The above is a legitimate question. Why did you guys do it? |
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| >> | Fuck. Fell asleep and missed the session. You guys are all right. |
| >> | beb |
| >> | >>26003921 |
| >> | I seriously don't like the idea of being in an air vent when Apollo said there's something creeping around somewhere. |
| >> | Why the hell does he have this anyway? Was it a gift? Was it already there? |
| >> | One day, Peppermint finds out Spearmint making out passionately with Photo Bomb. |
| >> | >>26006818 |
| >> | I wonder what other rooms they have here. |
| >> | >>26006818 |
| >> | Bath |
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| >> | bump |
| >> | File: 1452062261909.png (151.00 KB, 768x768, 21-12-52.png)Sorry to bail after last night pitiful update but my hand started hurting when I was doing some concept work for this quest. I'm not worried about it but after it started acting up I Just kinda don't feel it tonight. Sorry. |
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| >> | blimp |
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| >> | angry little hothead bump |
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| >> | File: 1452114274569.jpg (88.00 KB, 696x820, Failbaddon the hArmless.jpg)>>26003880 |
| >> | Apollo is a nut. |
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| >> | bumping thread |
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| >> | I'm feeling a little tired. |
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| >> | bloop |
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| >> | bemp |
| >> | bump bump |
| >> | I hope there is something interesting down here. And we can also find out what this stuff is. |
| >> | why is an underground waste river like this anyway? Who thought it was a good idea to build it like this? Or maybe all this waste is from the floor above apollo |
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| >> | Side note. |
| >> | Bump? |
| >> | beb |
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| >> | Bump. |
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| >> | I'm gonna call it a night here. I'm forgetting to upload pictures. |
| >> | gonna post later when not on mobile bump. |
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| >> | Bump. |
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| >> | This is what we've been doing the whole time before we found you photo bomb. |
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| >> | le beb face |
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| >> | page nine |
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| >> | man this facility blows. |
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| >> | >crashed elevator |
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| >> | actually we could go in there if we just don't engage the terminal right? |
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| >> | I think that's all for the night. |
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| >> | top beb |
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| >> | Exploring is fun when you find something that's not trying to kill you. Looking at you apollo. |
| >> | bump |
| >> | wonder what the pony was like that lived here. probably a jerk. |
| >> | bum bump |
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| >> | bump from 10 |
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| >> | I'm going to stop here for the night. I'll probably be busy tomorrow but if I have time I'll see if I can do a mid-day update. |
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| >> | Up |
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| >> | bump |
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| >> | bump bump |
| >> | ebump |
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| >> | Anyone wonder what could've made a pony leave hoofprints on a wall like that? |
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| >> | bump |
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| >> | Did we, uh, give PB a weapon so she isn't killed in our sleep? |
| >> | >>26068290 |
| >> | A lot of bumps needed this evening. |
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| >> | You could post something useful instead of just eatingup the bump limit posting "bump" you mongs. |
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| >> | beb |
| >> | here we go |
| >> | does anyone want to explore the other side of the bridge or should we just test our luck on that elevator? Or maybe we should just head to that vent we were going through before. |
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| >> | hooray for sleep |
| >> | On which floor are we even? |
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| >> | I hope we can find a fancy outfit for photo bomb. She's the only one that's not dressed up to succeed like we are. Other then her cool hat that is. |
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| >> | bump |
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| >> | File: 1452578937117.png (289.00 KB, 607x1023, 9jg5OSQ.png)European take-over time! |
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| >> | beb |
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| >> | Didn't we have a white room dream waaaaaaaaaaaay back on the first night we met spearmint? And there was some 4 armed bioform in it? |
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| >> | Sorry about another late start but I'm going to call it here for the night. |
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| >> | beb |
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| >> | File: 1452626077614.webm (2.00 MB, 640x360, 2spooky.1.webm)Spoopy bump |
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| >> | DUDE LET ME OUT |
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| >> | boop |
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| >> | bump |
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| >> | bub |
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| >> | Courtesy bumps. |
| >> | beb |
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| >> | Am I the only one who finds Photo Bomb adorable? |
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| >> | Whatever, I'm still going with what I said at >>26082858 |
| >> | bump |
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| >> | bloop |
| >> | dfd |
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| >> | I think that's where I'm gonna leave her for tonight. |
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| >> | Bamp |
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| >> | File: 1394758662338.png (68.00 KB, 320x320, mlfw5174_small.png)Wow this facility is pretty horrible. it's seems like it's a unicorn with a chunk of it's brain intact, whose whole purpose is to light a furnace. Fuckers couldn't have just gone with a traditional pilot light. Lets put the goo tube back and leave it be. |
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| >> | beb |
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| >> | Everything sucks! |
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| >> | should we try to have the unicorns comunicate with it, if that is even possible. It has some brain mater so it's worth a shot. |
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| >> | bathpls |
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| >> | Use the door. The door in the floor |
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| >> | I'm calling it here tonight. I'm sorry about the short update. |
| >> | >>26115428 |
| >> | lets loot that maintenance room, making sure no face eating roaches are going to hop out at us, then see if we can learn anything from the vox terminal. |
| >> | >>26115428 |
| >> | loot boop |
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